October Girl

I liked it too.... but really what was it about? Clones? -Max

You asked me to review your work if you'd review mine, like I said about mine you will be scared for life. Anyways I think this was great, but! Claud ...

Do you see the things you do to me? Do you see that things are happening? Do you see the one thing that is true? The things I do for ...

I can't help but feel weak and tired. Stressed and dull. Tired, not physically, but emotionally. The feelings come but do not go. I feel dull, and numb. I don't ...

Lindsay, great job, it was one of the best short stories I've read. Hopefully there's part two! Can't wait for it! -Max

WHAT?!!!!!!! You're just going to leave me hanging?!!!!! What are you freaking waiting for?!!! Write man, write!!!!!!!! There has to be more..... c'mon hurry up! I'm not going to wait ...

I liked it, it created a perfect scene. I liked alot. I felt like I was in pain. Keep writing!!!

Hey Timea, I want the other part hopefully there is one, Timea I got lost on where they were. I got lost, one moment they outside? the next their inside ...

I liked it, think it was creative. I have one word and that word happenes to be "Wow". Good job. Keep it up. :D -Max

I loved it... thats all I can say... because i'm breathless I want to read the next part!!!!

Oh my gosh Marc... good job.. I liked it, I really liked it. Keep up the good work... but most of all keep writing. I think you did a great ...

This was great Naarah, but I think that you could maybe use some spell check. I just wanna help I know today was your first day, so I won't be ...

*Max thinks for a moment* That really doesn't speak much..... Um. Really, wouldn't you put that on a blog or even on your profile why put it on.... no offence, ...

Timea.... I love the story but got kinda lost I didn't know exactly where they were. Anyways I wanted to also say I loved it you better PM me when ...

I have to block out thoughts of you. Because all it brings is depression. I walk in the damp sand. Watching the tide come in. My footprint is imprinted into ...